My friend Arnau is a little strange. He’s pale, very pale and he has two big fangs, but he's my friend and I’m gonna be his even if he is strange, because he’s a good guy in the inside:
"Hey Arnau, do you want to come dinner today at my house?"
"Well, I have, to ask if I can because…."
"Come on, it’s gonna be great."
"OK. If you insist so much…"
We were cooking the meat but Arnau sad that, he waned raw meat, a little strange but I didn’t pay much attention.
Then we were watching the tv until 12 o’clock when he said:
"Oh, is it 12 o’clock? Now?"
"Yes, you can stay and sleep over if you want. But he was very nervous and he run out of the house and he left all his things. I was very surprised, but I finally found out that he, Arnau, was a Vampire but I didn’t know if he was a good vampire, or a bad vampire."
Until two weeks later I didn’t have the vampire results. I found out, because every night at 12 o’clock I was fallowed him. And finally he committed a crime. He was my friend but I had to tell it to the police that he was eating human meat, but I would need proof, because if I didn’t have it the police wouldn't trust me. That's why I took photos of Arnau eating and killing humans.
With the proof the police believed me and put him in prison, where the moon could not touch him.And there he died.
1 comment:
Nil you turned one of you best friends into the police!! Some friend you turned out to be!
Hope he re-incarnates in time to go skiing with us!!
You write very well. Your ideas are creative and well developed...but you need to remember how to punctuate the dialogues.
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